Soap Opera Magazine Draft 2

Emmaline Soap Opera Mag

FEEDBACK -

By showing my poster too my class mates I established a large amount of feedback for my poster. They felt it was good that we had used bright and bold colours as this conforms to typical Magazine Cover conventions. But I was advised to change the banner to something that conformed more to the typical style of a Magazine article such as just a block square. Magazine covers are always usually very busy and there are space that still needed to be filled with either pictures or bold sub-titles that drew the readers attention. As well as this the writing of 'Will Brad steal Jessica off of Patrick needed to be resized or re-written to fit in the space provided. The price of the magazine needed to be made clearer and to fit with conventions of a magazine article it would be a good idea to put a banner at the top of the page showing other storylines than the one featured or from other soaps. The name of the soap opera that the storyline was taken from and that was featured needed to be made more obvious to the audience or it would defeat the object of using the magazine cover as a marketing technique. I was praised for the 'Prime TV' star idea as my peers said it was eye catching and unique to specifically that magazine but the positioning needed to be adjusted so that it did not block any of the important images from the cover. I however do not need to add a date, bar code or issue number as that was similarly already done and positioned and sized accordingly to the article. The sub-title of 'BEST FRIENDS GIRL' made good use of punctuation which soap opera magazine often do for emphasis and is a typical code and convention. I will be sure to use my peers opinions and advice to better my magazine article in order to match criteria.